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01-04-06 In The Fellowship of the Ring, there is a scene in which Frodo offers the One Ring to Galadriel. For a moment, Galadriel is cast in a dark glow and we are meant to see a glimpse of a path untaken. This is one of the few times in the book where Frodo freely offers the Ring to another. It's also the time when the potential recipient is most tempted, and the potential combination most deadly. It is all too short a scene, and I have always felt that much more was going on than Tolkien outwardly let on. Whenever I read the scene or see it played out on film I am captured by such a flight of fancy: what if Galadriel had taken the One Ring? So for the past 2 years or so I've been writing this little piece of fiction on and off. It's by no means finished: general editing needs to be done, there's at least one more chapter that should be added near the end, and some of the continuity and pacing in the last chapter is sloppy at best. Nevertheless, the time has come where I'd like to share it with people and get some feedback. Numerous hours were spent reading over sections of Lord of the Rings, the Silmarillion, and Tolkien's Unfinished Tales to figure out what motivates Galadriel and provide tight continuity to Tolkien's original works. This is not Tolkien, it's Middle Earth turned on it's head; a Middle Earth that was not meant to be. Minor characters become main characters, and main characters... well, you'll see. I suppose that it's literally the Mirror of Galadriel. Here is Altarial: Queen of the Night. Posted on January 4, 2006 10:47 PM Comments: Very good. In the spirit of the original work. Some spelling mistakes though...guard and amongst and a missing the in"who had THE ferocity to withstand the battle. Also I'm not sure what the final page means. Was Galdriel imagining what would happen if she took the ring? Posted on January 5, 2006 10:30 AMThanks Mom. :-) Is she? The whole thing is imagination, so what happened and what didn't is sort of a moot point. But to provide a more concrete answer, the last page and so just provides us with what really happened in Tolkien's original, except that I rewrite it from Galadriel's standpoint. I felt there was some verbiage there that needed to be revisited to get the full impact from the story. Posted on January 5, 2006 08:18 PMEew, a PDF. Why oh why?? Posted on January 6, 2006 08:00 AM |